Strengths:
- Good use of colour and crafting
- Strong research base
- Good documentation on blog
- Lots of scope within existing work
- Clearly communicates idea
Suggestions:
- Maybe investigate class relating to packaging?
- Subverting ordinary colours- e.g. fruit?
- Look at Japanese packaging
- Explore more media
-Try exploring different packaging shapes
What I will do next in response?
- Visit supermarkets and take photos to see colour trends
- Explore other packaging shapes
- Research Japanese packaging
- Explore other media- collage, mono and screen print
- begin working towards resolving the problem with some outcomes
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