Final crit

I was actually really disappointed with my feedback, as we had quite a long time to comment, but I only got two very brief, quite unhelpful comments.

Although they said liked the idea, I wasn't really given much to work with at all, and since I was hoping this crit would help to clarify where I should be heading, it wasn't very helpful.

When we broke off into pairs, I was able to discuss my project and concerns more, and I got some useful feedback:

Links to the use of colour are strong
Progression of ideas is clear and works well, but a focus is needed

What to do next:
Pursue mixed up colours of fruit- create packaging showing different colours
-Maybe paint the fruit to go in the boxes?
Repeat pattern for boxes

Action Plan:

Today- tie up % prints and inside/outside drawings- start to plan packaging
Friday- Prep screen and make positives for packaging
Saturday- Finish packaging designs and blog
Sunday- Finalise essay
Monday- PPP poster and slideshow
Tuesday- Print and make packaging
Wednesday- Write Evaluation, make visual evaluation, blog

First feedback

First feedback

Paired work reflections

Paired work reflections