After audio feedback and then a peer review, I now have a clearer idea to what direction my project is going in.
The main issues with my essay were:
- Some theorists missing
- Title needs reworking
- Structure at some parts needs revising
- Images should be discussed during the body of the text
- References for end section need to be included
- Conclusion needs more information
What I will do next:
- Re-structure grammatical errors
- Put images into the main text and remove parts about other examples of colour theory- discuss this through cereal boxes
- Kelloggs box hasn't changed over time- talk about how iconic it is
- Morrisons has wheat on the packet for cornflakes!!!
- Saver colour is so stark- discuss this more
- Explore marketing strategies more- thinking about audience and status objects
- Look at classes and morality within consumerism
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